Let The
Flowers Bloom
Elderly Mujibar has no money;
he owns a hovel and a large pond. Mujibar eats rice and boiled Shapla as he returns from work. He grows
Shapla in the pond that also has
Lotus in it. Mujibar picks both the flowers and keeps them in bunches before he
vends the flowers in the market. His five-year-old son fails to understand
which bunch will be used in their kitchen and what goes into the Hindu
household.
#
A white Lotus turns red as
the Sun rises high in the sky. Mujibar has no clue to the occurrence, and
considers it a phenomenon. His little son rushes to the veranda and stretches
his brown arms in the sunlight.
#
Leaving behind his little son
alone Mujibar dies of uncontrolled fever! In the afternoon the small boy
wanders around the paddy field, and in the morning he works in the tea-stall
adjacent to his hut. He serves tea in small glasses to the customers.
#
The small boy grows up a bit;
people call him by the name Robi. On a chilly winter morning a fakir arrives at
the tea-stall. He does not have warm clothing. Robi approaches the fakir, “My
father has given me a roof, but I have no sky to look at.”
#
The fakir offers a tiny
copper-box, a tabeez, which is
considered holy. He suggests, “Chain it around your neck, my son!” Robi protests,
“Hey, you gave me a piece of copper while I asked for the sky?” The fakir urges
enthusiastically, “Come on, it is filled with my prayers. I have given you a
mountain, rather, and now you break through the roof you have.”
#
No magic, but sheer trust
enriched with the flavor of innocence! Robi does not work anymore; he enjoys a
never ending stay in his hut as he cherishes the saintly mountain. The roof remains
unchanged; the moon does not arrive. A slice of the sky does not even appear
despite Robi’s uninterrupted wanting for it. He holds the tabeez tightly in his grip, and while looking at the roof he
murmurs, “I won’t offer you a drape if I don’t get a bird.”
#
A bird flutters its wings and
the sound is pretty familiar. Not a crow, nor a heron — some unknown bird. It
keeps standing in the mud-pad. A few flowers are visible, and they are not Shapla. Robi feels warm, his arms,
especially the spine region, as if there is a sudden rush of hot water along
the spinal duct!
#
A fragrant ambience sets in
while the bird floats up in the air. Robi’s face attracts drops of mud from the
flying bird. Handful of soil and the hut is flooded with sunlight that enters
from the broken roof. Robi feels much warmer now. A milkman knocks the door, “Store
milk in the can, chacha!”
Notes: Shapla (Water Lily) is the national flower of Bangladesh. The
flower and its stem are edible. A tabeez
is a metallic case (square, rectangular, round or oval in shape) that is
believed to exert worldly benefits to its users. Lotus is the national flower
of India, and it is used in Hindu households in religious rituals. Chacha is someone who is considered the
brother of one’s father.
Bio: Kiriti Sengupta is the
author of the bestselling trilogy; My
Glass of Wine, The Reverse Tree
and Healing Waters Floating Lamps.
Sengupta is based at Calcutta, India.
This is a very intriguing piece. I think it has political undertones that extend beyond ideologies or policy-making. It's a cry for development. For India to be whole again.
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DeleteA very poetic piece! With this dentist-author Kiriti achieves his Eureka moment. More creativity expected from him.
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DeleteThose who live in rural Bengal, those who are now residing out of rural Bengal, could sense the lines. The poem is not merely a montage, but it talks about the way of life which for centuries, has been shaped the life and culture of this region.
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I appreciate your remarks, Atanu! Thanks.
DeleteRiveting piece and quite experimental! Seems it is gonna catch the readers' imagination! Hats off to Kiriti's innovative ideas on unexplored terrains/genre of literature! He is lending a very unique orientation and dimension to the postmodern texts and textures.:)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bhaskar.
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